Dekho Dilli Ka Bhavi Ca Chala Aa Raha Hai

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Wah wah kya baat hai pulkit....................................good one

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Wah wah kya baat hai pulkit....................................good one

hey nice one.. it really doesnt sem to be ur 1st poem.. keep it up.. and keep on writing..:)gud luck

yar tum CA profession me galat agaye tumko Kavi ya sangitkar banna cahiye...jyada fayde me rahoge...

Very Nice Poem My Friend And after reading this I felt that all these things is happen to Me also,

i m not in delhi but the situation is same here ...................

 

  pulkit bhai behtrin poem hai ,sirf ye poem hi nahi dil ko chuh lene vali  line hai,mere khyal se apne apne poem ke dwara to sabhi logo ki dil ki  baat apne kah de hai,is poem me kuch line padh kar to mere aakh se asu bhi aa gaye ,vo line ye hai  

 

ABHI 12TH KI FAREWELL PARTY KI KHUMARI GAYI BHI NAHI THI,

BOARD EXAMS KI THAKAWAT MITI BHI BHI NAHI THI,

YAROON KI DOSTI KA NASHA UTRA BHI NAHIN THA,

TEACHERS SE BICHADNE KA GHAM MITA BHI NAHI THA,

AB EK NAYI DUNIYA KI AUR KADAM BADA RAHA HAI,

DEKHO DILLI KA BHAVI CA CHALA AA RAHA HAI

 

AB TAK KI DUNIYA BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT THI,

PAR AANE WALI DUNIYA BEHTAR KAL KI JAROORAT THI,

JIN DOSTON KE SANG HASTE KHELTE 12 SAAL BITA DIYE,

ROZ NAYE PLAN BANAYE AUR ROZ MITA DIYE,

KOI KEHTA THA MAIN ENGINEER BANOONGA,

KOI KEHTA THA DOCTOR BANKE DESH KI SEVA KAROONGA,

MAIN KEHTA THA YAAR KUCH TOH DIFFERENT KAROONGA,

AB UN BATOON KO HAQEEQAT MEIN BADALNE KA SAMAY AA RAHA HAI,

DEKHO DILLI KA BHAVI CA CHALA AA RAHA HAI

 

Hai Pulkit..i Don't understand hindi very much..but i really feel that u have done a good job..All the best ..continue ur series..

Amazing poem... waiting for the continuing part of the poem... keep it up...

Very awesome and true

Great work Pulkit.

After reading this poem i think that what r u doing in CA.....!

U r a great Poet Yar...............

 an excellent poem ........ the timing of your poem is good :)

nice poetry u  r  truly  a   born    writer

Great Poem!!!

it seems like CA is your hobby!! :D make poem as full time!!!! :D


Thanks for sharing!

It was truly Great!

JUST ONE WORD FOR U

GREAT    

GREAT

GREAT

THANKS FOR SHARING  SUCH A NICE POEM.

WAITING FOR NEXT ONE......................

Originally posted by : Madhu Kiran

Its amazing and fantastic work....

I know you always come up with different thoughts (articles, community, poems etc..,)

Just one sentence from me "INNOVATIVE IS YOUR SURNAME
"


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