hey pulkit.............nice to c that u have started writing poems too..............well u have asked for a geniune opinion so to b very frank ......i found it ok types.........may b coz i have high expectations frm ur writing........it';s not as gud as is ur other articles and lacks some where ...........i feel use of too many english words doesnt leave as much impact as it shud create...............but it does tell a story...........cud have been better...............i knw u wont mind my opinions.....so i m not going to say sorry........
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