Poem on betrayal

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 Thnk u so very much @ sh ji..nd superb nd meaningful addition thnx 4 thatyes

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 Thnk u so very much @ sh ji..nd superb nd meaningful addition thnx 4 thatyes

 Thnk u Mukesh ji nd Vandana ji !!

 Thnx a lot Tushar ji nd Aanya ji for your valauble commentssmiley

Very true words Dear Mansi jee..... Keep witing.....

Originally posted by : Success

Very true words Dear Mansi jee..... Keep witing.....

 Thnk u Very much !!

its something really in deep....  Bit typical for me to grasp ...

Sorry dear .. I really dont like to read such emotional stuff

 No props Renu ji..thnx for atleast noticing it !!

Again Awesome Poem Mansi

Thank you Poem Guru.........

 Thnx a ton Deepak ji..

Realy wonderful poem.smile. Keep sharing.

Your Comment: "I meant there are few people who cannot handle betrayal nd try to hurt self nd find suicide as the only solution bt thats not at all the solution its not the conclusion..Thats what i meant !!"

My reply: Thank you for helping me to understand the true meaning of the poem, which you wanted to convey, I am indeed sorry to misinterpret it. 

 

Your Comment: "Sorry if hurted anyone's feelings then.."

My reply: No, at least it did not hurt me, but made me think will people take that extreme step in life. However, you have clarified the same above.

Thank you for your perspective. Hope to read many more thought provoking and elegant poetries from your end Mansi ji. Let this gumption from your end continue and make us all hooked to read lot more poetries.

 

 

 Thnk u Hardik ji..

Thnk u very much Satish ji for understanding ma perception..hope now m clear about what i wanted to convey !!

And no sry from your part..undoubtedly I respect you thinking nd your perception !!

Originally posted by : Anamikaa Shuklaa

Marvellous............

 

But adding of last 2 lines I dont lyk personally...............

 

Not lyk d Ending part Dear........

VERY NICE

THANKS FOR SHARING

ITS REALLY GRT 

MANSI JI yes

 Thnk u Roshan ji..


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