My poem-in search of myself

awesome poem!!! it's great to know that some of the c.a students having such an excellent literary side as well...thnx for sharing.

awesome!! its really nice. well done.

Good one, presented beautifully...

Once again very nice poem.....

Simply Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dear Abdul,

Reality for you may be surreal but your creation is not an work of surrealism. It is a blend of Romanticism and Agnosticism as far as my knowledge and understanding take me. Unlike a surrealist, your work of art contains neither any unexpected juxtapositions nor any non sequitur. It may only be a bit obfuscated.

It reminds me of works of those supreme intellects - suffering from ataxia - who couldn't find their ways during the World War periods or in our case, during the first three decades of the Post-Independence period. They were no less confused than what you are today.

"Can't live no more within this crazy human race...

Wanna embark upon a path of rediscovery

Wanna improve my life and dispel off my misery

At times the thought of isolation scares me....

It strips me off my sense of morals and bares me

But when I give it a deep thought I realize...."Isolation's been my inspiration."

I gotta leave...gotta go....

There's nothin' here for me no more....

I gotta be free.......I gotta be...

.....Somewhere that I can just be me."

What impresses me most about your work, is its flow - as Resham has rightly pointed out while commenting on your first poem. You possess a gift - gift of flair for writing.

"Isolation's been my inspiration." 

Yes, it is, - for any creative mind, regardless of time.

I sincerely think that somehow you must get rid of such colossal confusion and get along with the CA course. Finish it. Long time ago, while reading a biography of Vincent Van Gogh a poem - not of the highest caliber but certainly worth remembering - got imprinted in my mind :

Doctors' fees are heavy,

Lawyers' fees are high;

Artists are supposed to entertain,

... And DIE."

I'd never even dream of such a fate for such a nice mind ( I wonder who will). So, finish your CA with the determination of a materialist. And then take the literary path with all seriousness. There's no reason why we can't have another Chetan Bhagat or a Sk. Abdul Aziz who will inspire his next generation in his own way.

Endure the pain, the confusion, the inhumanity of human-like beings and one day, sure as anything, your talent will fly - like a Phoenix bird, leaving the ashes far far behind.

Best of luck.

AWESOME POEM BRO

NICE PRESENTATION

THANKS A LOT

KEEP SHARING

awesome poem, presented with nice words

Originally posted by : aditya
	awesome poem!!! it's great to know that some of the c.a students having such an excellent literary side as well...thnx for sharing.

cheers

Good 1 dude..Keep writing n sharing..U got such a nice talent of writing rather than just knowledge of debit n credit like us...

Have read only the first 10 lines till now... and am already envying you...hehe... in a good way ofcourse... coz it will surely inspire me to write better than what I have been writing...

Will read the whole in leisure... coz your work is such that can be best devoured in leisure...

@ Saurav Da - Aapko takkar dene layak reply likhna padega...

good talents finish off ur CA Career too besides being a poet