My poem, messed up-thoughts

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My Thoughts - Written by Sk. Abdul Aziz (Myself)

My mind's flooded with thoughts

My heart's racing at the rate of knots

The sub-conscious is bombarded by a barrage of tricky questions

Memories of the past come and haunt me every now and then

I don't know where to end and where to begin

People change like the seasons

Though I couldn't ever quite figure out the reasons

Love nowadays is pretty akin to money

Comes and goes at every alternate moment

Anger for me is momentary......

I usually keep it dormant

I don't intend to be a role model

I can never be one

I never quite enjoyed the winters

Always like the sun

Girls r special.....they seem to exude serenity and innocence

We boys can be handsome but they r beautiful in the true sense

Fame's good....fame's crazy

U let it get the better of you and u stop seeing clearly....everything seems hazy

Love's beautiful.....takes u in a different zone.....

....You're in a world which is completely ur own

Temptation's a necessity.....to some extent unavoidable

Hatred is a harsh reality......it's inconsolable

I wonder if we ever reveal our true side

It's like we mask our emotions and tend to hide

How often do u breathe the name of ur saviour in ur hour of distress?

How patient r u during moments of stress?

When the going gets tough and the path to success seems rough......

.........Have u ever thought of giving up?

At times i feel weak......i feel dizzy

Then again at times i'm in a tizzy

My love's beautiful....my love's pure.....

It's strong and can certainly endure........

..........the test of time.

We live in an age of media hype

The girls just seem to ignore me....tell me..."I ain't their type."

Am tired of livin' in isolation

My love wherever u r....just come to me.....

Am tired of writin poems and love songs....

I ain't a saint....but ain't a criminal either......have done more rights than wrongs......

......or am at least tryin'.....

I was never an obnoxious guy.....

To be good and humble...is somethin' i try.....

.......to do every single day of my ilfe.....

Nothin substantial in life comes easy.....

U gotta struggle....gotta strive...

And then with patience u shall survive.....

I wanna embark on a long journey...

Wanna dive into the depths of life....

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GOOD THOUGHTS BRO

KEEP SHARING

Dear Abdul,

History , as you know , is a testimony to the fact that every work of art is born at the womb of pathos. This effulgent soliloquy of yours is no exception.


Waiting for someone special is more memorable an experience than actually having her. The sublimity of dream partners often bites the dust of reality and dies a painful death.


May be your thoughts are messed up;  but believe me my friend, you are blessed with solitude, reclusiveness and negligence which has blazed your soul - an incense stick - giving birth to such flowing thoughts filled with all-pervasive aroma.

 

"I wanna embark on a long journey...

 

Wanna dive into the depths of life...."

 

Waiting for more precious stones that you will collect from the Ocean of life.



SUPERB !!!!

Good Sharing Abdul.....be receiptive and positive.... YOU WILL RECEIVE ALL THE HAPPINESS, SUCCESS, JOY AND LOVE ...ALLAH BLESS YOU

@ Sourav Banerjee

Brilliant analysis Sir specially the vocabulary. These are the best comments i have received for my work. Thank you very much for your valuable comments.

great poem bhai

cheers

gr8 sharing..............

GOOD ONE YAAR..

very Good post !!!!!!!!

hey it's very nice dude...

keep on sharing ..

all the best..

Good 1 dude..Keep sharing...

Almost all ppl r having same kind of messed up thoughts but definately u ll get whatever u want..

 

Just be whatever u r..

 

Brilliant !!!

Nice thoughts and u have got gr8 command over language...

@ Sourav DA- Dada khoob bhalo.....Itne acche thoughts kahan se laate ho aap??

Grest poem bro.......

 

Thanks for sharing with us..........


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