Chalo ek din aisa manate hain

mind blowing, is it yours creation...amazing and so sweet

ya Rajveer ji its mine...........:)

bus likh lete hain thoda thoda

bahut acha likh lete ho ji thoda thoda b....................chalo ek din aisa manate hain ....sch me

@ priyanshu saxena,

Great lines written by u, its simple super...

Chalo ek din aisa manate hai...

Shortcut mai bolo na chalo fir bachpan ki shair kar aate hai...

Very Nice poem...straight from the heart...

Arey waaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Priya.............Bachpan ki yaad taaza ho gayi...

ekdum.....ICKLE PIKLE PING PING POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sachchi Aryan

Is it a 

"ICKLE PIKLE PING PING POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

yaar kya life thi kitne ut patang words bolte rehte the hum log n phir bhi hamare parents sab samjh lete the

i jus luv those days 

@ Sanjay bhaiya 

thanks bhaiya for appraisal jus wrote cause i feel hum sabhi ne ye sab kuch kiya tha apne bachpan me but shayad tareke different honge.........:)

Super duper mind blowing poem….

Keep writing Ji….

@ Ankur bhaiya 

thanks bhaiya i will 

:)

Wow!!! Very nice Priyanshu....mein toh bachpan mein hi chali gayi...woh masti, khelna khudna...

Thank you for sharing and taking us to old memories.

waooo....mind blowing

@ vandana 

hmmm sachi bada maja aata tha

n jab garmi ki chutti me nani ke yahan jaate the cousins ke saath kya dhama chaukdi karte the

poori dopehar nhi sote the

ufff 

bahut bahut yaad aata hai wo tym

Nice One

If you remember there is a song of Mr.Gurdas Maan

Bachpan Chala Gaya

Jawani chali gayi

Jindagi Ki Khubsurat Nishani Chali gayi.......

Rajneesh