Yaariyaan : series 8: the surprising end

 I dnt expected dat ki story iss  tarah khatam hojayegi ..................... little bit surprise............

nd  rishab  ko add hona tha last part me.........  

uske love ko crush/attraction  man  lia.......

and very easily happy ending hogai.................

 sorry.......... its MY VIEW  I m nt Expecting dis...................

But it is ur story it is upto u hw u ended it........

But as per me ,u can continue ur story wid more creative imagination wid some more parts............

love story ka itni jaldi happy end ................  

But u have  good writing skill .............

nd waiting to read more story frm u..............

Keep writing & sharing................

its story till ca-ipcc....

n wat abt ca-final????

wats ur next story ?

Nice nd expected ending Urvashi...... :)

will be really wating for the next story posted by u........

keep it up......

Originally posted by : Anamikaa Shuklaa
	I dnt expected dat ki story iss  tarah khatam hojayegi ..................... little bit surprise............ nd  rishab  ko add hona tha last part me.........   uske love ko crush/attraction  man  lia....... and very easily happy ending hogai.................  sorry.......... its MY VIEW  I m nt Expecting dis................... But it is ur story it is upto u hw u ended it........ But as per me ,u can continue ur story wid more creative imagination wid some more parts............ love story ka itni jaldi happy end ................   But u have  good writing skill ............. nd waiting to read more story frm u.............. Keep writing & sharing................

Actually... I wanted to carry on further.... but I thought people are eager to know the whole story!

I understand that each love story do not have "Happy Ending".... But Akashi is so effective character

which appeals me to do so.... Next about Rishabh, I wanted to add him in this last part... but I didnt find any link.. As he is completing his articleship from Jaipur itself, no connection with Mumbai city...

And he dont know Shreyansh personally...And not at all any connection with Dweeep too...!  Therefore I didnt find any place where Rishabh could be added.

Originally posted by : shiya
	its story till ca-ipcc.... n wat abt ca-final???? wats ur next story ?

I understand... but Akashi is final student in last series..

and she get married with Shreyansh, his schoolmate..

This story couldn't be streched further... If i'll do, may it lost its meaning.....

I'll try to bring more love stories of CA students for you all...

Awesum yaar ... the way u described the nice things about love is really sweet ... Brilliant as always ... So whats nxt ????

Amazing Love Story Urvashi. I read all your series. The way you add Songs in between it reminds me Chetan Bhagat.

vow.......... u r sooooo...........  good.......

bich-bich mein gaane toh awesome hai..........

very nice ending.............

vow..... just liked it very much..........

awesome....w8ing for next set of series....

awesome....w8ing for next set of series....

GREAT !!!

M speecless...

"Shreyansh Akashi ke us teddy ko gale se laga leta hai, maine kab kaha tha ki meri life se chali jao, best friend tha na mai, tum toh pyaar karti thina mujhse, ruk nahin sakti thi, sab jhut bolti thi na, kabhi kuch message karti kabhi kisi bahane se call karti, sab band kar diya, ek bar bhi nahin socha mere bare mein,  Sorry Akashi mai bahut bura hu, but yar touch me toh reh sakti thi na, not my friend now? Hmmm? Not my friend???"

The most touchy para....

hey urvashi.. i read yr all the sereise just now..

its really fabulas..

u really tried to put real feellings in all the characters... & u succeed in it...

reall really gud.:)