Yaariyaan: 6

What crap is this?

Originally posted by : GNB
	What crap is this?

It is story in parts.... This is 6th part .... 

Originally posted by : Shridhar Shah
	u r writing like an experienced novel writer.. This chapter was loosing grip in mid of the story but in end, tightens its grip on reader's mind.. good, go better and better... Also advise you to strat writing professionally, if you wish your hobby to advance a step ahead.. All the best :)

Thanks if you feel so than I'll try definately! I hope I could write next series well!

You are great writer

CA ki study karte karte itni good and emotional story k bare m likhna .........thts great Urvashiji

Hats of to you madamji...........keep it on............

wah wah and wah only...Just awesomeeeeeeeeeeee:)

Hey why you have not given title to this part?

Good writing..and also nice way of narating!!

N kabse you was imagining stry? This could be good short TV serial ..

Originally posted by : @ VaibhavJ
	Hey why you have not given title to this part? Good writing..and also nice way of narating!! N kabse you was imagining stry? This could be good short TV serial ..

as this part is mixture of emotions...

Rishabh's feelings..!

And Akashi's feelings after knowing about Shreyansh's love so.... 

Originally posted by : Urvashi
	Originally posted by : @ VaibhavJ Hey why you have not given title to this part? Good writing..and also nice way of narating!! N kabse you was imagining stry? This could be good short TV serial .. as this part is mixture of emotions... Rishabh's feelings..! And Akashi's feelings after knowing about Shreyansh's love so....

fir bi kuch to dena tha .. jaise Adieu..1st love or waisa kuch :p

Hmmm.... suggestion Accepted....:

I think aakashi nahi bhul payegi.........................

Pehla pyar bhulana aasan nahi hota...........................

Wo zindgi bhar yaad aata h.............

The best title for ths part will be..........

FIRST LOVE NEVER ENDS.......

Originally posted by : CA Deepak Dargad
	The best title for ths part will be.......... FIRST LOVE NEVER ENDS.......

Thanks for your suggestion ... I'll work on it .....

heyyy wen is the next series coming 

waiting for it........

Originally posted by : Surbhi Aery
	heyyy wen is the next series coming  waiting for it........

TODAY