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What crap is this?

Urvashi Saini (Difference between Peak Performers & everyone else is what "everyone else" thinks) (1494 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

Originally posted by : GNB
	What crap is this?

It is story in parts.... This is 6th part ....

Urvashi Saini (Difference between Peak Performers & everyone else is what "everyone else" thinks) (1494 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

Originally posted by : Shridhar Shah
	u r writing like an experienced novel writer.. This chapter was loosing grip in mid of the story but in end, tightens its grip on reader's mind.. good, go better and better... Also advise you to strat writing professionally, if you wish your hobby to advance a step ahead.. All the best :)

Thanks if you feel so than I'll try definately! I hope I could write next series well!

Deepak Dargad (Chartered Accountant....) (9787 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

You are great writer

CA ki study karte karte itni good and emotional story k bare m likhna .........thts great Urvashiji

Hats of to you madamji...........keep it on............

CA RAHUL AGRAWAL (Assistant Manager-Service Tax) (1733 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

wah wah and wah only...Just awesomeeeeeeeeeeee:)

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@VaibhavJ (Believe!! Live your dreams!) (33511 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

Hey why you have not given title to this part?

Good writing..and also nice way of narating!!

N kabse you was imagining stry? This could be good short TV serial ..

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Urvashi Saini (Difference between Peak Performers & everyone else is what "everyone else" thinks) (1494 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

Originally posted by : @ VaibhavJ
	Hey why you have not given title to this part? Good writing..and also nice way of narating!! N kabse you was imagining stry? This could be good short TV serial ..

as this part is mixture of emotions...

Rishabh's feelings..!

And Akashi's feelings after knowing about Shreyansh's love so....

@VaibhavJ (Believe!! Live your dreams!) (33511 Points)
Replied 30 November 2012

Originally posted by : Urvashi
	Originally posted by : @ VaibhavJ Hey why you have not given title to this part? Good writing..and also nice way of narating!! N kabse you was imagining stry? This could be good short TV serial .. as this part is mixture of emotions... Rishabh's feelings..! And Akashi's feelings after knowing about Shreyansh's love so....