Waqt ka saudagar

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AAJ ZINDAGI KE BAZAR ME WAQT KA SAUDAGAR AAYA THA...

 

APNE KANDHE PAR,JHOLI BHAR BHAR KE KHUSIYA LAYA THA,

 

HUMNE SOCHA KUCH KHUSHI KE PAL,ME BHI KHARIID LOO,

 

JAA BETHA USKE PAAS,JAHA USNE KHUSIYO KA DUKAN LAGAYA THA,

 

MERI JHOLI ME KUCH SUKHE PATT'E,EK TUTI HUI LATHI AAYI....

 

HUMNE KI SHIKAYAT,"KYA HUMARA YUHI MAJAK BANANA THA"

 

SAUDAGAR NE KAHA...

 

 "MAJAK TOH TU KAR RAHA THA,ZINDAGI KO KHEL SAMAJH RAHA THA,

 

MUJHE BADI TAQLIF HUI THI LADKE!!! JAB TUNE MUJHE THUKRAYA THA,

 

MEHNAT,LAGAN,PARISHRAM KI JAGAH JAB TUNE AALAS KO APNA SATHI BANAYA

 

THA..

 

APNE MAA BAAP KO JAB TUNE KISI GAIR  KE LIYE KHOOB  RULAYA THA....

 

ME TO TERE LIYE AB BHI JHOLI BHAR KE KHUSIYA LAYA THA....

 

ZARA DHYAN SE DEKH WO SUKHE PATT'TE NAHI...

 

TERI ZINDAGI KI TAQDEER HAI,BUDHAPE SE MURJHAI TERI MAA KI TASVEER HAI...

 

WO TUTI HUI LATHI NAHI,

 

TOOTNE KE KAGAR PAR AAYI..EK BAAP KI LACHARI HAI...

 

 

 

LA WAPAS KAR MERI JHOLI...

 

ME TOH TERI KHUSIO KE BADLE TERE GAM KHARIDNE AAYA THA...

 

BY ARYAN SINGHANIA

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ME TOH TERI KHUSIO KE BADLE TERE GAM KHARIDNE AAYA THA

 

Like this line the most....

Good Dear..................

left tears in my eyes..sadcrying..

speechless..indecision

lovely...

awesome specially the lines for MAA-BAAP

Originally posted by : Onam gupta

left tears in my eyes....

speechless..


Incredibleangel

You are really nice

SPEECHLESS....thank you Aryan...GOD BLESS YOU

 

ME TO TERE LIYE AB BHI JHOLI BHAR KE KHUSIYA LAYA THA....

 

ZARA DHYAN SE DEKH WO SUKHE PATT'TE NAHI...

 

TERI ZINDAGI KI TAQDEER HAI,BUDHAPE SE MURJHAI TERI MAA KI TASVEER HAI...

 

WO TUTI HUI LATHI NAHI,

 

TOOTNE KE KAGAR PAR AAYI..EK BAAP KI LACHARI HAI...

 

LA WAPAS KAR MERI JHOLI...

 

ME TOH TERI KHUSIO KE BADLE TERE GAM KHARIDNE AAYA THA...

 

Aryan for me this is the post of the day.....Though reading it almost at the end of the day....

This conveys very deep meaning...

Originally posted by : CMA. Sanjay Gupta

Aryan for me this is the post of the day.....Though reading it almost at the end of the day....

This conveys very deep meaning...

Thank you Sir Ji..

For your very comments

A very nice poem which reflects the beautiful mind that Aryan Singhaniya possesses.

 

Keep writing, dear Poet. You have your reader waiting.

"khusiyo ke badle, tera gam kharidne aaya tha.." its such a great line aryan, great poem on nice theme,, waqt ka saudagr.., yes truly said.. time is ofcourse a saudagar.., he keeps exchanging his goods... offers us today, take back our yesterday, and then gives us tomorrow by taking back Today.. Wonderful aryan.., lage raho mere bhai...

@ Sourav Da

Thank you Da...

Bus thore bahut likh leta hoon...

Thank you Sourav da....for ur wealthy words spending on me....

irrespective of my presence in CCI....but ur presence.... always there in my mind n heart..

Originally posted by : Harini
" time is ofcourse a saudagar.., he keeps exchanging his goods... offers us today, take back our yesterday, and then gives us tomorrow by taking back Today..
 

Very well said di...

Thank you di...for adding a master stroke to this post....

Its always a very hon'ble feeling to have a stamp of ur comments....


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