Wo loriyaan wo thapkiyaan

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Wo loriyaan wo thapkiyaan

 

Wo ninniyaan wo jhapkiyaan

Kitni yaad aati hain humko

phoolon pe wo titliyaan

wo maiya ka daantna

wo santi se maarna

wo ro panda jor se

wo chillana shor se

maiya ka chumkarna

baba ka thapkarna

kitna yaad aata hai humko

bhaiya ka puchkarna

wo baba ke saath me jakar gubaare ki jid karna

wo maiya ki chunri le kar hatimtai ban jana

ab jo karte yaad hai bachpan

aakhon se ansoo jharte hain

lagta hai aisa ki kyun hum

din par din aise badhte hain

har pal mera mann kehta hai

main phir bachcha ban jaun

maiya ki godi me sir rakh

chupke se phir so jaun

by: me

Replies (11)

Thanks a lot again for sharing your words….there is some kind of honesty in your writing. laugh

Keep writing and sharing…smiley

 

woh nanha sa bachpan, woh pyara sa bachpan,
aankhe bhigota hai jab yaad jab aata hai bachpan,

woh gudde aur gudia, woh mittike makan,
woh naye naye khel suhane laya tha bachpan,

woh choti choti shararate aur kisiki chedkhani,
woh yaro ke sung masti ki yaad dilata hai bachpan,

woh barish me nachna to thandi me kaapna,
woh barf ki chuskiyon ki yaad dilata hai bachpan,

woh maa ka dulaar, woh apnko ka pyaar,
woh behno ki lorry yaad dilata hai bachpan,

woh dada ki pith pe khelna to dadi ki gaud me sona,
hardam unki ungaliya pakade hue sawara tha bachpan,

woh school me dhamal, karte the kuchh na kuchh kamal,
woh master jee marse bachte bachate gujara hai bachpan,

man jaye ek bar khuda jo mere dil ki tamnna hai,
lele meri jawani aur dede muje firse woh pyara sa bachpan.

 

 

Your and Ankur's poem made me remember my fun-filled days of childhood. Our club has really nice poets and those who appreciate poems. Thank you for your creative post. Keep sharing...

thanks Veeral sir its ur greatness...:)

मैं अपने छोटे मुख कैसे करूँ तेरा गुणगान

माँ तेरी समता में फीका-सा लगता भगवान,

 

विकल' न होने दिया पुत्र को कभी न हिम्मत हारी

सदय अदालत है सुत हित में सुख-दुख में महतारी

 

काँटों पर चलकर भी तूने दिया अभय का दान

माँ तेरी समता में फीका-सा लगता भगवान|

 

लाड़-प्यार से सदा सिखाया तूने सच्चा ज्ञान

माँ तेरी समता में फीका-सा लगता भगवान|

 

By : Subhadra Kumari Chauhan

Priyanshu..Very Nice poem...Very innocent writing...Seems you are back to your "BACHPAN'...

thanks a lot bhaiya 

and aapne Subhadra ji ki poem post ki thanks a ton for this 

 

kitni achchi poem hai matlab ek dum jeevant

 

Thanks a lot to all poets.......

 

sharing lovely and sweet kavita........

 

 

Dekha....CCI ne aap logo ko kaya se kaya bana deya......very good...

Really right said by veeral sir,

In our club so many lyric writers are there and giving really heart touched poems to us..

Thanks again for sharing ur remembering  childhood feelings in poem..

Great work done by u ..

 

thanks Ajay Bhaiya n thanks Karthikeya ..:)

@ ajay bhaiya actually CCI ek aisa platform hai na ki yahan par perform karne ka mann hota hai because itna huge response milta hai

 

to ye feel hota hai ki our talent is of any worth.......:)

 

thanks Again all of u 

n specially Aryan, Ankur bhaiya, Sanjay Bhaiya for adding superb values to the posts


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