Kya bharat ko sudhar ki zaroorat h ya.....

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Jee lenge yaar
91 Points Joined July 2010

Ye baat mere chote se shehar Rohtak ki h. Pata nhi baki jagahon par kya aalam tha.

Kuch to karna hoga

 


 

Sab khush h k bharat vishwa vijeta bana.Mujhe bhi khushi h par kya isse kuch badlav aayega.Usi par pesh h ek kavita.

 

Holi diwali sab thi manali

Cigrette daru bhi thi chadali

Charon taraf harsh o ulaas tha

Fir bhi na jane kyu dil ye udaas tha

Puchi maine usse wajah is udaasi ki

Wajah nikli wahi purani aur basi si

Is jeet ko lekar sabhi bahut prasann h

Par asli bharat ki tasveer par sabhi sann h

Kyu machta har choti baat par bawal h

Isi silsile me nipun puchta aapse kuch sawal h

 

Kya kabhi un majdooro ko bhi chai pe bulaya jaega

Jinki wajah se bharat banta aya h aur banta chala jaega

Kya 1 crore ka 1 croreva hissa bhi us kisan ko mil paega

Jisne bhookh mitayi h sabki aura age bhi mitaega

Kya raja jaise mantra 2G scam karne se pehle sochenge

Kya fir rathod jaise aalakamaan masoom bachion ko nhi nochenge

Desh ki sakh dav par lagane wale kalmadi paida hone band honge

Ya modi wale ghaplo se bharat hi band honge

Kya anna jaise log janchaha badlav la payenge

Ya shasan hathiyaye log manchaha hi karte jaenge

Kya gali me ladne wale gundo ko koi samjhayega

K wo desh k liye lade to shahid kehlaega

Kya fir kbhi hindu muslim dange nhi honge

1984 ki tarah log fir se nange nhi honge

Kabhi apni izzat ki chhod k,dusre ki izzat k liye bhi lad payenge

Kya sone ki chidia k wo swarn par fir se ug jayenge

Bhagat singh ki kalpana jaisa bharat kya kbhi banega

Jahan ek Hindustani doosre se nhi doosre k liye ladega

Kya unch neech ka fark kabhi yahan khatm hoga

Ya 21-12-12 ko sari dunia k sath bharat bhi bhasm hoga

Is 121 crore aabadi k liye kya koi aur bhagwan utar k ayega

Ya chuni gyi sarkar aur uska andha kanoon hi is desh ka bhavishya banaega

Kya is kavita ko padne k baad aapme kuch badlav aayega

Ya yahi sochenge k ye to pagal h bolta hi jaega

Kya bharat ka ye yuva, bharat ko sarvshreshtha banaega

Ya desh k sudhar k liye doosro se hi umeede karta jaega

Kya use samajh kabhi apna uttardayitva bhi aayega

Ya doosro ko gali dekar hi wo apna kaam chalaega

Bachpan me suna tha akela chana bhaad nhi fod sakta

Aur yahi soch k aaj koi shuruat nhi krta

Par sagar to boond-boond se hi bharta h

Ye kyu tu nhi samajhta

Meri samjh me ek baat h aayi

Akele se bahut  kuch hota h bhai

Ab se main har galat ka virodh karunga

Aur aap bhi samjhe ye baat ye umeed karunga

Main nhi chahta k is kavita se aapki khushi me kami ho

Par kuch khushi unke sath bhi baanto jinki aankho me salo se nami ho

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On 23 April 2011 at 19:45 Report
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Jee lenge yaar
91 Points Joined July 2010

Agar pasand aaye to apne se puchna k main kya kar sakta hu aur doosro ko bhi padana aur unse bhi yahi baat karna...

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On 23 April 2011 at 19:47
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Thanks for the Post jje........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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On 23 April 2011 at 20:01
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yes BHARAT KO SUDHAR KI JUROORAT HAI

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On 23 April 2011 at 20:35
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856 Points Joined July 2009

Very Good   ...................

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On 23 April 2011 at 23:48
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Guide / philospher
184 Points Joined June 2008

brother i dont hav any idea wat ppl wil understand from  wat u hav wrritten here ya jo ehsaas apke andar umad raha hai....but wud like 2 say 1 thng..that chahe koi reply kare ya na kare...u dont get dishrtnd at all..untill n unless koi bhi in shabdon ki gehrai ko apne andar utaar na le kuch fayeda nai hoga...but m happy 2 kno ur feelings....

the diff is dat i wish dat htese thngs may apply  2 whole world n it becomes a lliving heaven on earth....

appreciate every single word of urs....

koi badle na badle u keep dis light witihin urself...jab jab hum ek boond bhi uss sagar me milne lagenge tou change ayega...

all d best n wish more ppl in dis word undrstnd dis...


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On 24 April 2011 at 00:02
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Working C.a (finalist)
225 Points Joined August 2009

SIRJI BHARAT KO nai HAR INSAN KO SUDHARNE KI JARURAT HAI. KHUD KO SUDHARO BHARAT SUDHAR JAYEGA.

JAI HIND

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On 24 April 2011 at 00:06
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225 Points Joined August 2009

SORRY BRO NIPUN IF U DONT'T LIKE MY COMMENT.

BUT IT'S TRUTH YAAR, EACH N EVERY PERSON SHOULD TRY TO CHANGE, IF U R

FAITHFUL TO UR MOTHERHOOD U R A REAL INDIAN.

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On 24 April 2011 at 01:28
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8316 Points Joined June 2009
Rightiy said by vivek. Only and only we are responsible for it. Bharat kal bhi sone ki chidiya thi aaj bhi hai aur age bhi rahegi. . .
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On 24 April 2011 at 02:02
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8316 Points Joined June 2009
Cricketer aur kisano ko alag rakho. . . . Kisano kuch nahi milta iska wajah cricket nahi hai. . .khud kisan hai. . .unke haq ke liye koi nahi ladega unhe khud khada hona hoga. . . Agar cricketer ko wc jitne par crore milate hain par sahido ko 1 lakh ka VADA iske jimedar cricketer nahi wo khud hai. Rishwat lene se jyada dene wala gunahgar hai. . . .main aapki bhawan samjhata hu par ye to aise hi chalega. . . . Hum iske aadi hain aur shayad yehi jarurat hai aur yahi hamar durbhagya hai. . . . Sorry for adverse comment. . . .
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On 24 April 2011 at 02:10
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1733 Points Joined July 2009

well said, both nipun and vivek sir......a country is not made by piece of land or roads or rivers, but a country is what its people is....If people can change, country will change itself....akele chana bhad nahi fod sakta...but agar ek chana shuruat kare, to sab kuch kar sakta hai......we have just seen the example of Anna Hazare, and our history is full of examples like it....thanksfully, unlike countries like China, we have democracy, and thus giving the ultimate power of people. We all just need to use it well.

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On 24 April 2011 at 09:18
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Originally posted by : Vivek

SIRJI BHARAT KO nai HAR INSAN KO SUDHARNE KI JARURAT HAI. KHUD KO SUDHARO BHARAT SUDHAR JAYEGA.

JAI HIND

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On 24 April 2011 at 11:45
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Carpe Diem !!!
6535 Points Joined July 2010

It was a pleasure reading it... keep writing...!!!

 

And Sharing too...!!!

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On 24 April 2011 at 13:30
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Originally posted by : Resham

It was a pleasure reading it... keep writing...!!!

 

And Sharing too...!!!

Yes

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On 24 April 2011 at 19:25
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Jee lenge yaar
91 Points Joined July 2010

sabse pehle to sabho ka shukriya...

Uske baad aap sabhi se meri darkhwast h ki hindi k upyog ki aadat dale...

Log kahenge ki Nhiii,angrezi sare vishwa me faili h isliye hum us hi ka prayog karenge..

Par wo log kabhi ye nhi sochenge ki angrezi vishwavikhyat isiliye huyi kyuki uske logon ne uske liye mehnat ki h,dunia ko bataya ki angrezi sarvshreshtha h.Haan rasta beshak galat tha,sara dunia ko gulam banana aur apko to pata hi h...

to vada karo apne aap se k hindi hamari h aur hum ise dunia tak pahunchayenge,taki ek din aisa bhi aaye k hindi rashtra bhasha hi nhi,vishwa bhasha bhi bane..

iske liye maine chehre ki kitaab(facebook) par ek samooh ki rachna bhi ki h..

uske sath judiye aur vaad vivaad me bhag lijiye..

Ab baat is kavita ki karte h..

suresh ji ne bachan sahb ki kavita dal kar mera manobal badaya h..unka tahe dil se shukriya...

Radha krishanji aur Maheshwariji ka bhi shukriya..

Vishal ji..Apse sirf itna hi kehna h k main kbhi nhi rukne wala...par ye zarur sochunga k jab piche mudkar dekhu to aap jaise dost mere sath hooo...Nhi bhi honge rukna to tab bhi nhi h...Jana h jana h,chalte hi jana h,na koi apna h,na koi thikana h...

Vivek ji se mera itna hi kehna h ki wo pehle is kavita ko pade jisme yahi likha h ki akele se kuch zyada nhi hota par kuch hona kuch na hone se to behtar h..Main kabhi chips ka wrapper rah chalte nhi fainkta..agar mere paas bag h to usme nhi to apni jeb me hi rakhta hu jab tak ki kisi kudedan se na milu..khud nhi fainkta aur agar koi thukta hua mile to use bhi ek bar pyar se samjhata hu..agr nhi manta to thoda kathin ho kar bhi samjhata hu aur ek bhartiya hone k naate use uske kartavya ka ehsas dilata hu.aur aise kayi chite bade kaam h jo khud karta hu aur logon ko karne pe majboor karta hu..aur wo meri baton ko mante bhi h..aap bhi kuch aisa shuru kijiye..log anpad h ye soch k kaam nhi chalega..jo h so h par agar hum unhe nhi batayenge ki thuk fainkna,kachra machana galat h to wo kaise samjhenge..mujhe lagta k aap meri baat samjhenge aur apnayenge...

Jha sahab,maaf kijiyega par aap shayad meri bhawnao ko samjhe hi nhi..Baat sirf chai ki ya paiso ki nhi h...baat h sahi aur galat ki..aalakamaan ye nhi samjhte ki cricket k aage bhi dunia h..sab moh me bandh k jahan dunia chal rhi h wahan chalne ko taiyar h...koi nhi sochta k kabhi us moh se bahar ki dunia me bhi jhankna chahiye...

Singh ji shayad meri baat ko samajh hi gye honge...

Mayankji reshamji anitji,aapka bhi shukriya...

Iske baad aapke saamne haazir IPCC ki parikshaon k baad hi ho paunga..to umeed karta hu k aapme kuch badlaav ayega aur aap us badlav ko auro me bhi dekhenge aur is kavita ko jan samooh tak pahunchayenge....

:->

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On 25 April 2011 at 10:13

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