Very nice story sir.
SHIV KUMAR
(CA FINAL)
(143 Points)
Replied 28 April 2011
Originally posted by : SHIV KUMAR | ||
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His wife was expired after giving birth to his daughter Seetha. After the death of his father, mother was feeling lonely and sad. She was taken care of these children dear sir, your story is really wonder ful. but in starting it was confusing because you write AFTER THE DEATH OF HIS FATHER, but who is father here? actually you want to say that father of Mr. X. your write that MOTHER WAS FEELING LONELY AND SAD, but who is mother here, actually you want to say that mother of Mr. X. after reading the whole story we got the actual massege of the story. but in starting the language was not clear. plz correct this. His wife was expired after giving birth to his daughter Seetha. After the death of his father |
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