Soul touching poem

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I really felt proud of you Mom

 

I went to a party Mom,
I remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom,
So I drank soda instead.

I really felt proud inside, Mom,
The way you said I would.
I didn't drink and drive, Mom,
Even though the others said I should.

I know I did the right thing, Mom,
I know you are always right.
Now the party is finally ending, Mom,
As everyone is driving out of sight.

As I got into my car, Mom,
I knew I'd get home in one piece.
Because of the way you raised me,
So responsible and sweet.

I started to drive away, Mom,
But as I pulled out into the road,
The other car didn't see me, Mom,
And hit me like a load.

As I lay there on the pavement, Mom,
I hear the policeman say,
"The other guy is drunk," Mom,
And now I'm the one who will pay.

I'm lying here dying, Mom....
I wish you'd get here soon.
How could this happen to me, Mom?
My life just burst like a balloon.

There is blood all around me, Mom,
And most of it is mine.
I hear the medic say, Mom,
I'll die in a short time.

I just wanted to tell you, Mom,
I swear I didn't drink.
It was the others, Mom.
The others didn't think.

He was probably at the same party as I.
The only difference is, he drank
And I will die.

Why do people drink, Mom?
It can ruin your whole life.
I'm feeling sharp pains now.
Pains just like a knife.

The guy who hit me is walking, Mom,
And I don't think it's fair.
I'm lying here dying
And all he can do is stare.

Tell my brother not to cry, Mom.
Tell Daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven, Mom,
Put "GOOD BOY " on my grave.

Someone should have told him, Mom,
Not to drink and drive.
If only they had told him, Mom,
I would still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter, Mom.
I'm becoming very scared.
Please don't cry for me, Mom.
When I needed you, you were always there.

I have one last question, Mom.
Before I say good bye.

I didn't drink and drive,
Yet I am  the one to die.
 
why people don't understand that  drinking and driving is the last thing to do! 

 I still feel proud of you Mom, because they had no Mom like you to tell them what you told me.

Replies (7)

its really very awesome....specially the last line !!

its also conclude that we should always listen 2 our parents not considering if its good or bad for us as it will always proves to be good for us!!

really a gud one ... wid a msg leaving behind..... " not to drink nd drive "...

but the reality is no one is bothered abt it... neither " their own lyf nor of the other "....

Hmmmmmm............. superb poem but i love this font

SUPERB....................AWESOME.........................KEEP SHARING...........................

Mummy papa humesha humare bhale k liye kahte hain...
Originally posted by : Osama J. Q
Mummy papa humesha humare bhale k liye kahte hain...

Aur ham Unki baat nahi mante

Awesome------Post


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