My kavita

Inspirational 2494 views 18 replies

Friends this is my 1st post in cci,,,,

This poetry is written by me during my articleship i hope u all are also connect with itsmiley

Jab tum ho udaas
bahut udaas
aur koi na ho pass toh,,,,,
'Nirash mat ho tum kar sakte ho'

jab ho tumhara dimag khali
ho tension ki hariyaali
aur na ho koi rasta saaf toh,,,,,,
'Nirash mat ho tum kar sakte ho'

jab competition ho tagada
boss ho tumhara akada
aur na ho koi frnd saath toh,,,,,,
'Nirash mat ho tum kar sakte ho'

Replies (18)

Mind Blowing.............. Awesome.........

 

As I already told u yesterday, dis is too good..............

 

n eager to read more n more poems of urs..........

 

Now keep on sharing in CCI also..... w8ng  4 d nxt.......

 

Superb lines....

 

"Nirash mat ho tum kar sakte ho"

 

Cute, True and simple words from a genuine soul.smiley

 

Indeed this is a great and highly inspirational poem. Amrita, you seriously need to explore yourself as you have all the potential to become a good poem writer.enlightened

 

I still remember my similar kind of observation about Blogger Pulkit Gupta at the time of his first CCI post and now his name needs no introduction as he had been selected as winner of prestigious “most favourite member of the club award 2011”.  

 

All the best

thanking you Ankur sir......smiley

thanks for motivate me to write more....

Hey very cute Kavita........... Keep it up ......

Mind Blowing.............. Awesome.........   A

this is too gud 
keep it up g
 
Very good poem...keep it up
.smile. Realy wonderful and motivational poem. Thanku for sharing, keep sharing. U should write more poems. Jsk.

 

 

thnxsmiley

So much good..mam...plz sharing....

Thanks for share yes

 Thanks for sharing Dear!!!!

Nice kavita!  just what I was looking for.

 

 

 

 

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