Nice Post bro...keep writing...

Very nice composition..

ALL THE BEST FOR TOMORROW FRIENDS.. MAY YOU ALL PASS WITH FLYING COLOURS..

very nice...................keep it up.......................all d best to all

nice post

There will be happiness, there will be joy,

there will be sorrow and there will be cry

nice lines............

Good composition... WISH YOU ALL THE BEST FOR TOMMORROW, HOPE FOR THE BEST.

Thank you guyz for the appreciation and your wishes... :)

hmm........nice one abhijit........liked the last line.......

Take this failure as just a delay in your success,

Continue your run in this amazing race.....

 Btw i too had written one veryyyyyy depressing poem when i cudnt clear a year ago......sharing it wid ya all.......

Mai akela gum-sum udaas,

Hairaan, pareshaan aur niraash.

Koi bhi nahi jo mujhe yeh bataye ke jeevan itna katheen q hai,

Koi bhi nahi jo mujhe samjhaye yeh samay itna jatil q hai

Hazaaro sawaal hai man me jinka koi jawaab nahi,

Fir bhi mai sawaal kiye jaata hu,sayad kuch toh raahat mile kahi

Log kehte hai k mai bolta bahut hu,

Mai bolta bahut hu q k mai sehta bahut hu

Lekin saayad abb mai aur seh na saku,

Aankho me aanshu liye aur hass na saku,

Maana k jeevan ek sanghrash hai,

Fir bhi saayad ab mai aur sanghrash kar na saku

Bas itni si duwa hai uss rab se,

Na ho koi aur udaas,

Na ho koi aur niraash,

Duniya me na aaye kabhi mere jaisa ek aur vikaash……..

Vikash Bhai.. your poem was really very depressing one..  clearly shows what you were going thru in those days.. 

Thanx for sharing it.. 

" Take this failure as just a delay in your success,

Continue your run in this amazing race....."

Dear Abhijit,

This may be the first poem that you have shared here, but the captioned couplets may well be the best that you'll ever produce; because the message is Universal - transcending place and time.

Thoughts that are fruits of momentary feelings rarely leave behind permanent impression upon our memory. In your case, your thought has achieved this rarity.

Failures teach us more lessons than wins - the moments of pain, anguish, loneliness and all those feelings that impel us to think that there exists no tomorrow, can, at times, bring the very best out of us. It's difficult, if not at all possible, to envision the complete beauty of a place if we look it from where we stand. But the same place, with all its blemishes, looks beautiful when viewed from a distance.

Likewise, it's difficult to perceive how "amazing" the race is, while we are running it. But once we are distanced from it through time, we start to recognize its true character.

Keep writing, both Abhijit and Vikash. May your efforts be rewarded, always.

Wow.......
gr8 composition.....:)

Nice efforts

Faisla aane se pehle main bhala kyun haar manu

jag abhi jeeta nahi aur main abhi haara nahi.

Sourav Sir,

Thank you very much for the appreciation and for adding your valuable thoughts in it... The words you have written have great meaning... I didnt knew I could ever write a poem.. but looking at all the replies received.. I am satisfied that I have not done a bad job... Thnx for your wishes too...

Thank you everyone.. Wishing success to ALL..