Gulaami nhi hai kisi ke anushaashan me jina,,,,,
Ye toh h jivan k sachhe sache me dhalana…..
Anushaash*t log hi paate h safalta har kadam me,,,,,,,
Sikh lete hai andhere me dipak ban jalana…..
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Did you write this poem?
It's very good :)
wah wah par thoda critical he
| Originally posted by : Shrikant | ||
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Did you write this poem? It's very good :) |
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Naah,,,,its not my creature......
Thnx 
| Originally posted by : sunil89 | ||
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wah wah par thoda critical he |
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Thnx
Nxt tym se easy language wala try karungi.......
Hamesha ki tarah ............samajne main time lagta h.....................2-3 baar padhna padta h
But Nice One.........................
Aap ko writer ban jana chahiye....................
gajab hai but ek baar meri poem bhi pad lo @ anupam52.blogspot.in
| Originally posted by : Mansi Kotecha | ||
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Thnx
| Originally posted by : *CA Deepak Dargad | ||
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Hamesha ki tarah ............samajne main time lagta h.....................2-3 baar padhna padta h But Nice One......................... Aap ko writer ban jana chahiye.................... |
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CA chhod k writer hi h future plan......
i sud learn hindi typing........den u can easily read it
Pronaunciation of "nhi" in first lin can`t understand.
Its NAHI
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Thnx sir fr ur comnt n advise,,,,,,,,
i vl consider it
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