Poem on Betrayal
One of the most difficult pain,
Is of betrayal,
From which nothing can be gained !!
Betrayal is the result of undeserving excess trust,
Iron of relation dies due to this rust !!
After betrayal both suffers,
But who was more geniune,
Will most suffer !!
Betrayal takes you to only one end,
That is where, relation ends !!
Some take betrayal to such point,
That suicide seems the only solution,
But that's not the conclusion !!
p.s : Written by Mansi Kotecha
Thnk u so much Anamikaa ji..Actually I have seen few cases where people take betrayal to suicide state..according to me it cant be solution of any problem specailly when its not your fault !! This is ma personal view !!
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After betrayal both suffers, But who was more geniune, Will most suffer !! p.s : Written by Mansi Kotecha |
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vry gd Mansi........... kp writing & kp sharing !!!!
The poet makes a very intriguing observation on Betrayal by concluding that in order to evade relationship; one resorts to committing suicide. That is a bit tragic, when someone takes such a harsh measure to punish oneself.
One may still pose a question as to whether there any ways to obviate suicide.
However its an interesting poem on betrayal Mansi ji.
Good one dear....
i wana add one line
Sometime betrayal take us to that state..
we starts cursing to our fate..
Dont take betrayal as end of life...
its a lession learn for life time...
very good one poem mansi ji. thanks for sharing
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vry gd Mansi........... kp writing & kp sharing !!!! |
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very real and practical one ....keep it up 
Thnk u Saurabh ji, Varsha ji..
Thnx Shrikant ji for your valuable Comment in form of emotion !!
Thnk u Satish ji for your appreciation !!
Btw I never said that to evade relationship one has to resort to suicide..you actually din get d meaning that I wanna convey..Infact m against it !! I meant there are few people who cannot handle betrayal nd try to hurt self nd find suicide as the only solution bt thats not at all the solution its not the conclusion..Thats what i meant !!
Sorry if hurted anyone's feelings then..its my point of view and i meant that suicide can be solution of no problem in this world..
And yaa nice images of quotes !!
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