Jane kab hum itne bade ho gaye...??

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Friends here`s something which always gave me a thought that how i passed off my 21 years of age..,

 

 

Jane kab ham itne bade hogaye..,

 

Kabhi pehli baar school jane me dar lagta tha,

                                                aaj milte hi dost ban jate hain.,

 

Kabhi maa - papa ki har baat saachi lagti thi,

                                                aaj unhi ko har pal juth kehlate hain..,

 

Pariyon ki kahan ki jagah, 

                          aaj - kal raat ko phone pe dosto ki baate sunna zyada acha lagta hai..,

 

pehle first ane ke liye poora saal padte the,

                                               aaj pass hone ko taraste hain..,

 

cartoons ki jagah ab reality ache lagte hain.,

 

kabhi choti chot lagne pe itna rote the,

                                               aaj dil tut jata fhir bhe sambhal jate hai.,

 

pehle dost bas sath khelana tak yaad rehta the,

                                              aaj wahi dost jaan se zyada pyaya lagte hai..,

 

ek din tha jab palme ladna pal me manan to roz ka kaam tha,

                                              aaj to ek baar juda to fir gehre rishte tak kho jate hai.,

 

sach me zindagi ne bahut kuch sikha diya..

Jane kab ham itne bade hogaye..,

 

I want my child hood back;(

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very good poem sir                       

"Koi lauta de mujhe bite hue din."

I think we all rue for those childhood days.

Very nice poem, Karan. Love it.

"ek din tha jab palme ladna pal me manana to roz ka kaam tha,

                                              aaj to ek baar juda to fir gehre rishte tak kho jate hai.,"

Likhe jao ( Bengali = Keep writing).

Spammers ! Don't ruin the sanctity of this wonderful family. Go and do your business elsewhere. The world is big enough for you to pollute. Leave this small space only to us - the family members.

Originally posted by : Sourav Banerjee MA,MSW

"Koi lauta de mujhe bite hue din."


I think we all rue for those childhood days.


Very nice poem, Karan. Love it.


"ek din tha jab palme ladna pal me manana to roz ka kaam tha,

                                              aaj to ek baar juda to fir gehre rishte tak kho jate hai.,"

Likhe jao ( Bengali = Keep writing).
 

Nice poem !

Thanks and keep writing .......

very nice sharing.................

superb......

fir se mujhe school me jaane do na zaraa !!! :)

very nice poem

It was wonderful post to read and cherish...

 

Thanks Karan.....RG

Originally posted by : (: ..ivap**

fir se mujhe school me jaane do na zaraa !!! :)

Tumne toh bachpan ki yaad dila di....thanks dude for sharing a lovely poem

Originally posted by : Richank Garg

It was wonderful post to read and cherish...

 

Thanks Karan bro....

lovely..........

Good one.

   

   


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